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Verse ChronicleJune 2005 The Great American Desert Reviews of Where Shall I Wander, by John Ashbery; Elegy on Toy Piano, by Dean Young; Overlord, by Jorie Graham; Black Maria, by Kevin Young; Delights & Shadows, Flying at Night: Poems 19651985, & The Poetry Home Repair Manual, by Ted Kooser.
Ashberys poems revel in such intimations of disaster (theyre atease without a strip), a disaster curiously similar to thenameless wars and borders and betrayals of Audens early poems.In the middle of these Egypt-like plagues, punctuated by smalltouches of absurdity and big doses of nonsense, the reader maywake wondering if he hasnt read this poem before. Almost allAshberys poems, those dead-ends of déjà vu, offer the dream ofmeaning endlessly deferredthe deception finally becomes theexpectation. Theres a sucker born every minute, said a bankerinvolved in the hoax of the Cardiff giant, and in Ashbery theresa sucker born every line. When the contract between writer and reader is so fragile, thepoet can pretend to fulfill it with no more than the chaff andloose ends of sentences, fragments that never grow up to bewholes. In general, the more of Ashbery there is, the less thereis (the worst poems here are prosy and interminable). Much ofthe book, despite its local fireworks, is the exhaustedrepetition of his old vaudeville routines: And so on and on. Here we have the embrace of American idiom,whether high-stepping or lowbrowed (Ashberys range is as broadas Whitmans), the steep descent of tone, the enjambment almostas flirtatious as Miltons. Ashbery offers some things few otherpoets do (including the patented double take and stop-on-a-dimevolte-face) while being incapable of offering what most thinkabsolutely necessary. This makes him not just a slapstick artistfor our fallen timesno, it means that when you read Ashbery youhave to forget much of what you know about reading poetry. Youhave to take satisfaction where pleasures are rarely given andnever let yourself wish for what isnt there. (Theres so muchthat isnt there.) Ashbery undermines many of the axioms onwhich poetry restshes smiling, not like Carrolls cat, butlike Schrödingers, neither dead nor alive but always alreadyboth. Some of the most engaging passages here comment archly on partiesor clothes. They make you wish that, instead of writing poemslike a man with an attention-deficit disorder, Ashbery werecapable of writing a novel as long as Remembrance of ThingsPast. Though sometimes its a perverse pleasure to see largeissues reduced to candy floss, theres a devious moral world,largely untapped, beneath his nonsenseAshbery is a man notafraid to write whatever rattles into his head (if he had aninternal censor, one logical as a lawyer, hed lose all thatdevil-may-care charm). Alas, its no use asking this poet to besomething he isntand sometimes no use trying to like thesomething he is. When you read his poems, you sigh with pleasureto see a thing so odd done with such panache, suchsavoir-faire, such élan, such well, whatever the wordwould be, it would be French, in order to apply to that ultimateboulevardier of American poetry, Mr. Ashbery. Ashbery has inherited the mode of attention that gave usBaudelaire, but also Walter Benjamins archives project andRoland Barthess Writing Degree Zero. He finds America in itshither-thither diction much as Whitman (who scrawled downexamples of American slang in his notebooks) did in its Americanscenes. An outsider sees things too common for us to notice, ortoo strange for us to admit, and for his whole career Ashbery hasbeen an American outsider, though a much honored one. He is nowrapidly going, even so, from elder statesman to venerable antique(as once he went from Pecks bad boy to elder statesman)all youcan do with such Victorian whatnots is dust them off once in awhile and wonder what people ever saw in them. The quality of whimsy is not strained. It falleth from Ashberylike the gentle rainand it falleth on a lot of young poets now,students in the School of Goofball Poetics, boys who cut theirteeth on Ashbery and Charles Simic and James Tate and now showlittle interest in any poems written before Dada came to town.Dean Youngs sixth book, Elegy on Toy Piano, is fairlyrepresentative of the younger generation, full to the gills withgeegaws and thingmabobs and dojiggers, but one tradition embracedis a lot of tradition rejected.[2] What happened?Huh? Well, now that you mention it, fella, I dont want to hearyour times table after all. Not every Young poem is quite thisscatterbrained, but he loves non sequiturs much as a snake lovesmice. (Not that non sequiturs seem to like him very much.)Reading Young is like watching a stand-up comic on a cablechannel, one unsure of his audience, staring at the crowd like agazelle surrounded by a pack of hyenas, and bombing like a B-17.The problem with comedy of this trivial sort is that, rather thanshockor provoke, it manages merely to irritate (the reader isreduced to muttering Uh-oh or Ho-hum). A poet who wants to getlaughs begins to write for the joke, and when he cant nail thathe just lays down a laugh track. Poets find it hard to be seriousnow, unless theyre writing about their lives (on which they tendto be all too grave, as if working up a pathology report). Atbest, Youngs poems mock themselves as well as poets of moreserious temper. At worst, theyre the poems of someone who tooka mail-order course in surrealism: One walking a lobster on a leash.Forever late like the White Rabbit, such helter-skelter linesseem in a headlong hurry to be elsewhere. In one poem, Youngmentions setting an alarm clock for five a.m., to write fastwithout thinking, and a lot of these poems must have beenwritten that way. He grooves along like a scat singer, notreally caring if hes blithering (not caring is, after all, thepoint). Sometimes his poems have delightfully loopy premises(one consists of a hundred true/false statements; another jugglesthe complicated mathematics involved in liking a married couple),but sooner or later they run out of steamhes not a poet whoknows when hes overstayed his welcome. Youngs poems want so badly to be loved, after a while yourewilling to buy them a ticket to Lapland, just to be rid of theirshining, eager faces. On the rare occasion that this poet doesthink about something serious, he jokes about it for a couple oflines, then scurries off in embarrassment. Elegy on Toy Pianoshows what happens when a poet inherits a difficult,contradictory tradition (the uses of surrealism are almost asvarious as the uses of lyric) and can make nothing out of it buttrash. Jorie Graham loves big ideas the way small boys like big trucks.Her books start with some notion just the far side of grandiose(What does it mean, the dust jacket trumpets, to be fullypresent in a human life? Howin the face of the carnage ofwar does one retain ones ability to be both present andresponsive?) and end up grinding the Himalayas down to gravel.In Overlord, her tenth book, she visits Omaha Beach, attemptingto see beyond the placid sandschildren playing along the shore,the rusting landing craft become tide poolsthe indiscriminateslaughter of June 6, 1944:[3] This odd shorthandhistorical flotsam and jetsam swept up alongthe tide line of verse (she employed no fewer than sevenresearchers, though she still cant tell a bomb squadron from abomb group)recreates some of the frenzy, the helpless panic, ofthose first moments of D-Day (the code name for the invasion wasOverlord). Yet the bullying italics and the knowinguse of reading, as if the sands were simply another text, dragus away from the helpless soldiers (the most telling passages inthese poems are snippets from their letters and interviews) tothe mastering presence, the overlording, of the poet herself. For a long while, Grahams poetry has suffered this peculiarimmodesty. No matter where her poems start, sooner or latertheir subject becomes the poets hyperkinetic awareness of herown senses (reading some of her poems is like tripping on LSD),and this too easily turns into the blank stare and lapel grabbingof the quietly madIm actually staring up at/ you, you know,right here, right from the pool of this page./ Dont worry whereelse I am, I am here. Graham has reduced the poetry of meditation to navel-gazing; theminute attention to her nattering thoughts, to the violence ofher vision (at one point she gets down to photon level), merelyreworks, in stilted fashion, the stream of consciousness DorothyRichardson pursued in the Twenties. If Graham had concentratedon the accident and contingency of war, had honored the men whosedeaths she casually invokes, Overlord might have become thesort of serious meditation that produced Geoffrey Hills Mysteryof the Charity of Charles Péguy (1983). Graham is so busy taking everything back to first principles,hurling Plato and Zeno into the breach, shes in danger offorgetting that poems embrace dullness only at great risk. In the wrack and wreckage of her current work, its hard toremember the difficult pleasures of Erosion (1983) and The Endof Beauty (1987), high-voltage moments in the poetry of theEighties. Unfortunately, the powers a poet harnesses for a bookor two may eventually prove so unruly that what was once animagination in tension becomes a stampeding coach and six. Grahams lack of any sense of proportion reduces the argument ofOverlord to something like On the one hand, my kitty hasAIDS; on the other, a whole lot of guys died on Omaha Beach.(If you think the poet can stoop no lower, that herhigh-mindedness cant be more unintentionally hilarious, youhavent read the poem in which she buys a homeless man a meal andpractically kills him.) Halfway through the book, the poorsoldiers have been forgotten; and Graham, like a mini-U.N.,begins deliberating upon the idea of nations: Time of the flags is long pasthowSuch hectoring, humorless lines, trite as tar paper, are worsethan the propaganda Marianne Moore wrote during World War II.For years, Graham has scoured the bushes for finches, has priedloose every stray barnacle she has come across; there was longhope that these scattered minutiae (one mans junk being anothermans scientific collection) might one day prove the coralaccretion of a grand poem or two. Alas, the method has longsince become her meaning: she scrapes and shuffles and observesher grains of sand, but in the end all she has to show for it isthe scraping and shuffling. Almost everything Graham writes offers the swagger of emotion,pretentiousness by the barrelful, and a wish for originality thatapproaches vanityshes less a poet than a Little Engine thatCould, even when it Cant. If I close her later booksdisappointed, its never a disappointment in their boldness, butrather in her inability to bring these huge engineering projectsto successful conclusion. Will that stop her? Like hell itwill! Theres this skirt, see, named Delilah Redbone, see, and this dickin Shadowtown named Jones, and the sap falls for her. Thefrails maiden name was Trouble, and the dick, his middle name isDanger. If youve never gotten your fill of alibis, gunsels,snitches, paybacks, hideouts, and hooch, Kevin Youngs BlackMaria pays homage to the great films noirs of the Forties andthe hard-boiled fiction of Chandler and Hammett.[4]The trappingsof a new genre often refashion an old one (though in new featherseven a good poet may look ridiculous). Almost two decades ago,Nicholas Christophers detective novel in verse, DesperateCharacters (1987), showed how difficult the genre can be for thedilettante, but then almost a century and a half ago anotheramateur proved that brilliant things could be donewhat is TheRing and the Book but a detective novel? (Some might claimParadise Lost is a police procedural.) Young, whose last book was a misdirected and sentimentalreworking of the blues, is an ambitious young poet with quirkyideas. Black Maria is meant to be a film, its sections, calledreels, composed of poems that straggle down the pagehalf-starved for punctuation: I didnt have a rats chance.The occasional phrase reveals what delights await a genretransformed, but the rest is jazzed-up jawing and sidelongremarks that niggle their way toward wisecracks (pinstripetwo-lane/ legs must refer, clumsily, to the dark seam in oldnylons). Young loves wordplay more than any contemporary exceptPaul Muldoon; hell go to great lengths to fetch a pun, and evengreater ones for a bad joke. The poems here are addicted tointernal rhymes, winsome glances at the reader, and a dictionthat slides from the most perfumed poeticism to black dialect(the language at times suggests that Jones and Redbone are black,though its not entirely clear). Such frenzied invention might be just the thing to invigoratecontemporary poetry, which often cant see past the third-ratetraumas of private life (the vampire in Sylvia Plath turned outto be Plath). Think how Audens urban renewal projectstroubledthe Thirties and FortiesLetter to Lord Byron, NewYear Letter, For the Time Being, and The Sea and the Mirrorrazed someof the settled assumptionsof modernism. Young hasseen that noir can capture, as critics have been saying fordecades, the anxieties of the ageand what age is more anxiousthan ours? Youngs vers noir, alas, has none of the suspense of film ornovel. Narrated in a slack-jawed style where all characters talkalike, it meanders along without much by way of plot, theincidents democratically clichéd, the denizens proud to bestereotypes, only the language working overtime. Young isdevoted to his dumb jokes, and by the time youve beensledge-hammered by my entrenched coat, a well-minxed martini,here comes the bribe, two eggs,/ over queasy, an ashtrayfull of butts/ & maybes, she played/ soft to get, and caseclothed (all right, I admit a fondness for older ladies thought his shinola// didnt stink), youre punch drunk andready to cry Uncle! You might forgive such punishing punning,such quarrelsome quibbles, as merely high spirits, but the poetsarchness falls prey to far too much blowsy sentiment (genre isdoing a lot more for Young than Young is doing for genre): a canwhose jagged lid// opens your hand/ as if charity, smellingof catharsis/ & cheap ennui. Bullets are made of lead, and sois the repartee. Black Maria is set in the Thirties or early Forties (there arereferences to a Tommy gun and a decoder ring, one thatmight come in handy for deciphering the poets system ofcapitalization), but somehow the modern age of the bikini (a wordfirst recorded in 1947), the Saturday night special (1968), andpaparazzi (1981) keeps sidling in. Then there are the wobblywriting, the misdemeanors of spelling and grammar, the dogsdinner of punctuation, the dialect that often goes on the lam.As the story inches forward, repeating some scenes as if wehadnt gotten the idea, the whodunit becomes the who gives adamn? After some 200 pages, though were no closer to knowingthese characters (or having any idea whats going on by way ofplot), theres a passage of science fiction that seems to havefallen out of another novel on the paperback rack. Young has tried so hard to make this a tour de force, hesforgotten, not just the ontology that makes film noir sohaunting, but the suspense that makes it entertaining. Thereseems no world beneath the nattering surface of his language,which lacks the philosophy of form on which genre depends. Thisgiddy be-bop poet hasnt yet found the right back alley for hisgifts. Ted Kooser is a prairie sentimentalist who writes poems in anAmerican vernacular so corn-fed you could raise hogs on it.Kooser never met a word he didnt like, unless it was a long one,or one derived from Latin, or Greek, or Frenchin the new poemsof Delights & Shadows, which recently won the Pulitzer Prize,as well as the older ones in Flying at Night, he stands for afoursquare, hidebound American provincialism that, by gum, hasevery right to write poems and, by golly, means to write them,too.[5]His poems tend to be short, dying for air, afraid to domore than tell you what happened on the porch, or right out thewindow, or maybe, just once, down the block. William Carlos Williams may be responsible for the strain ofAmerican individualism that, in our poetry, took the multitudesof Walt Whitman and squeezed them into a shoe box (think of themop-haired words Whitman loved, not just foreign but American,too). It seems odd that poets should be drawn to plain-talkingyokelism in a country clapped together out of immigrant ways andmigrant tongues, but it doesnt take long for a country toestablish its own traditions and begin to hate everybody elses.In Williams, and Creeley, and Kooser, you see the wish to makepoetry out of the American language, meaning any word that can bespoken down at the corner grocery without making the clerk furrowhis brow (when Kooser gets stuck for an adjective, he slaps inold and keeps on going, so after a while hes got old men, oldladies, old dogs, old moles,old coats, old stoves, old snow, oldthunder,old No Hunting signs, and much else).It doesnt matterthat the grocery is nowa Starbucks and the clerk is called abarista. Kooser wants a poetry anyone can read without shame andunderstand without labor, because he thinks poetry has too longbeen in the hands of poets who go out of their way to make theirpoems difficult if not downright discouraging. This would comeas a surprise to Shakespeare and Milton, Pope and Browning, andother poets who thought poetry was for those who loved it enoughto spend time educating themselvesindeed, who felt thatlearning to read poems was itself an education. (Folks likeKooser want to render Shakespeare or the Bible in kitchen-sinkEnglish, without a difficulty or a discouragement in sight.) The current poet laureate, like many of his countrymen, doesntlike anything that seems tough going. (Its fortunate he isntin charge of teaching music, which has all those pesky notes.)Kooser prefers a poem whose meaning can be plucked from a drystreambed like a nugget of gold. A Glimpse of the Eternal Just now,Its not much of a fight, and the monosyllablesbeat the disyllables hands down.Theres nothing awful about a poemthat ends in mystic nothingness (at times you feel Kooserpractices a kind of prairie zen), slathered with sentimentlike corn on the cob with butter, but, to outdo it, the next poetoff the farm will have to write in grunts. Maybe youd like to get into this poetry racket yourself.Koosers Poetry Home Repair Manual is full of down-homecharm and genial misinformation (the poet laureate is folksy asan old rain barrel).[6]He dispenses dollops of homespun wisdom tofolks who want to write poems but have never had the gumption totrytheyve been scared off by, of all people, poets themselves,who apparently spend most of their time advancing their careersand worrying about literary critics and making their poems sotangled up that, well, theyre just nonsense to an ordinary Joe:most of us learned in school that finding the meaning of a poemis way too much work, like cracking a walnut and digging out themeat. If Shakespeare knocked on his door for advice, Kooserwould scratch his head and say, Why, Bill, I guess these looklike poems, but theyre way too much like walnuts for me. Whomamong all the poets of the past was our poet laureate inspiredby? Whom does he use as an example? Why, Walter de la Mare! For Kooser, poetrys main selling point is that it doesnt haveany rules, because rules are apparently very bad things tohave. He doesnt much like rhyme and meter (he doesnt like theword prosody, either, because it sounds so stuffy). Still, Imalways eager to learn how to write poems, so I opened the PoetryHome Repair Manual at random and got some important advice: Saya poet writes, She had eyes like a chicken. Presto! Achicken pops into your mind. And, presto, a chicken did popinto my mind! Why, it was simple as that! But things soon got abit more complicated, and I began to wonder if this metaphor andsimile business wasnt harder than it was cracked up to be. Acouple of paragraphs later, the poet complained, You know whatIm talking about. Weve already got a lot of chickens and acouple of washing machines on the table. And, presto, therewere a lot of chickens and a couple of washing machines on thetable, clucking and sloshing away, so I turned to another page.There I found KooserI imagined him whittling away at a stickall the whilecomparing the words of a poem to a bunch of hamcubes on a styrofoam tray, covered in shrink-wrap. And, presto! The odd thing is, on rare occasions Kooser writes as if he knowsmore about poems than he lets on. A widow speaks: How his feet stunk in the bed sheets!Though the poem is unambitious in the virtuous, Calvinist wayKooser admires, theres a darkness here that Frost would haverecognized. The prairies were once so lonesome and dreary and treeless thatmen called them the Great American Desert. A hundred and fiftyyears later, theyre growing lonesome once more, and the unspokensubject of Koosers poetry is the gradual depopulation of theGreat Plains. There has always been emptiness and madness inthose small towns (Kooser was a life insurance executivethe onething such an executive knows about is death), and also thesilent desperation that leads to Koosers whimsies about, say,mice abandoning a newly ploughed field, dragging tiny carts andcarrying miniature lanterns. Its a pity that these strange,unsettling poems were all written more than twenty years ago.There are a couple of haunting narrative poems in his new volume(Koosers real gift may be for narrative), but everything else isstraight as a rail fence and just as wooden, too. Before he letplain speech become its own tyranny, before he started worryingabout poetry cops intent on enforcing the rules, he showedsigns of becoming a poet who knew something about cruelty and hada retrospective melancholy eye. Then he decided hed be betteroff chawing plug tobacco and selling straw hats to tourists. In the past, I have written with such pleasure on RichardWilburs elegant and well-mannered verse that perhaps I may beforgiven for not cracking a full bottle of champagne across thebow of his latest Collected Poems.[7](Wilburs poetry was also discussedby Daniel Mark Epstein in The metaphysics of Wilbur, The NewCriterion, April 2005.)Wilbur has added a dozennew poems, as well as the contents of Mayflies (2000), to theNew and Collected Poems of eighteen years ago (he has alsoprovided, like sweepings, a few show lyrics and his verse forchildren). About the best that can be said of the new poems isthat they are reminiscent of Wilburs late style andimpressive poems for any octogenarian to write. Here are housesseen at night in Key West: Yet each façade is raked by the strange glareThis is the sort of thing Wilbur does well on a good day, and ona bad one does so half-heartedly it calls the whole enterpriseinto question. The quiet intelligence of these linesthe calmunfolding of their perceptionlooks so easy anyone should be ableto do it; and almost no one can. I love the reference to thewatch fires that begin Agamemnon, love those houses driftingalong in the fog like mysterious ships, love the reminder thatthe houses are built on sand; but the end, however quietly itinvokes Frosts Desert Places, seems muddled and listless.Its curious that John Ashbery, who is only a few years younger,still seems our contemporary, while Wilbur sounds like an oldfussbudget sorry he threw out his last pair of spats. A year ago American poetry, very briefly, had two centenarians,Richard Eberhart and Carl Rakosi. Rakosi has since died, butthis year we will add another, Stanley Kunitz. As far as I know,no country has ever been able to boast of so many centenariansamong its poets; and I suspect we will see many more (Im notsure whether this trend is scary or notwhat Keats was able toaccomplish in four or five years is quite beyond what most poetscan do in eighty). I trust that Richard Wilbur will be writingpoems for a long while to come, and that some will be better thanthe new poems here. His Collected Poems, which includes poemsso ornate Fabergé would have wept, deserves to be on thebookshelf of any serious reader. NotesGo to the top of the document.
This article originally appeared in The New Criterion, Volume 23 June 2005, on page 66 Copyright © 2008 The New Criterion | www.newcriterion.com http://www.newcriterion.com/articles.cfm/the-great-american-desert-1079
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